Wednesday, 10 December 2014

Second Draft

When I completed the first draft Friday week ago, I was very nervous about the editing for several reasons.
  1. I had written the story in fragments and had to combine them in editing.
  2. I wasn't sure if I would be able to clearly perceive the pace of the book, because as the author I already know what's happening.
  3. I'd never edited a complete work of this length before.
  4. The way I had repetitively 'polished' small bits of writing in the past wasn't going to be possible for a complete novel.

Nevertheless I tackled the editing with enthusiasm at first, but after a week, it began to seem too onerous. I began to feel overwhelmed. That was about the time my wife convinced me to let her read the first half of the book. She did an amazing job of finding contextual issues and where wording was unclear or belabored the point. With her help I was able to get back on track and focus on the issues that needed fixing, rather than worrying about what I might be missing.

The lesson I've learned from this is that once you have a first draft you've at least checked for the most common spelling and grammar issues, it's not too early to start getting feedback.

A.I.Marin.

Friday, 28 November 2014

Writing, My Journey

I Started writing many years ago, but the story's more complicated than that.

In high school in the 1980s, I was a straight maths-science nerd. In year 12, I remember thinking, 'I wont ever need English Skills. I'll be working in a scientific lab with mass spectrometers and scanning electron microscopes. Why are they making me do English?'

For a long time I did work in scientific labs. Then my career changed and I worked with computers and data. During this time I would imagine science fiction and fantasy stories. Sometimes I would write an exciting scene or two. Slowly I began to realise that my poor spelling, grammar and writing skills in general, were holding me back from being able to share the exciting movies playing out in my mind.

I now realise that communication skills are essential, no matter what your chosen career. I wish that I had made more of an effort back in school to acquire these skills. I have made the effort since then.

About a year ago I started writing snippets of a tale that I thought would make a good story. I wrote the scenes that I felt had the most impact and importance. I was doing this writing after work, and on weekends, whenever I could find the time. In October 2014, I came to the realisation that I was able write a book. I felt for the first time in my life that I would be able to complete something of that length and achieve a minimum level of readability. Six weeks ago I finished up at work and started writing full time.

Starting with the bits and pieces I already had written, I set out to complete a first draft. The objective of my writing was volume. I'd never written anything as large as a complete novel before and I was unsure if I could. A little Google research found that the average size for a novel is about 74,000 words. Some simple word counts on Kindle novels I already owned and liked gave an average of about 85,000 words. I wrote in the way that was easiest for me with the objective of reaching about 120,000 words

By the time I had the story to a point where I felt I could end the book, I had reached 140,000 words. It only took five weeks. So now I know I can reach the volume easily, the focus is on editing and assembling the writing into a book.

I initially wrote each of the major character's stories separately.  Now during the editing process I am interweaving the different characters stories. This, and the fact I had written some scenes early then had to write the 'connective tissue' that would join them up, has made the editing more challenging. There are timeline issues and I have had to move some parts of the timeline around to make the pace of the book work better. This has led to context issues, where a sentence or a paragraph has been moved and it now implies a context that does not match the surrounding text.

Writing this way, was a direct result of tackling my largest concern at the time. Could I write a complete novel! Now that I know that I can, and how difficult the editing can be, I plan on writing my next book differently. More on that some other time.

A.I.Marin

Monday, 24 November 2014

Welcome

Welcome to my Blog.

I'm Andrew and I have started writing Science Fiction/Fantasy. I have always been fascinated by the merging and intersection of these genre's. Much of my writing has features of both. I try to explore different ways of blending these and other genre's together.

I intend to post news and behind the scenes information about my books and my writing. I've started before my first book is published, so that I can share the journey with you.

Lets see where the road takes us.

A.I.Marin.